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Vantage (Poem-16)


“The world is a tragedy to those who feel, but a comedy to those who think.” 

– Horace Walpole


Positivity is the wrong perspective.
Ignore the ones who say
You can always improve and cling on to hope

Dwell in the realms of guilt
Since it makes no sense to
Make the most of your present

Sulk in the dark
Since it's pointless to
Focus on the light

Value yourself little
You have no reason to
Let go of your self-doubt

You're worthless, and just a burden
Yet, you often assume that
You have so much potential

You're running out of time
So there is no reason to think that
There is much life yet to live

You've reached the end
So don't think that
A lifetime is at your disposal

A dark fate awaits you
So don't think that 
Positivity is the correct perspective.


[Now read the lines from the bottom to the top (i.e.-read the poem backwards)...]


-Armaan Kothare

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Vantage (noun)- a perspective, or a position from which you watch something

Message- The main aim of this poem is to throw emphasis on the concept of 'perspectives'. On reading the poem in the order that it has been displayed, the reader is presented with a very negative approach towards life. This approach attempts to pollute your mind and dissuade you from thinking of positivity and the themes of hope and motivation, while also rejecting the idea of living in the moment, and making the most out of every second of your life. 

On reading the poem backwards, however, the intended message is symbolically shared with the reader. Reading the poem backwards, that is, from the bottom to the top, symbolises an ascent. The ascent of the mind, in particular, by letting go of all the evils that collude one's self-esteem. It symbolises the soul literally getting out of the purgatory state of negativity and guilt, and moving towards a positive take on life. I hope that this is your takeaway from this post: make the most out of every moment of your present...learn from the past, and hope for a brighter future.  While you may not have 'infinity at your disposal', you definitely have the power of choosing your collective perspective towards life: which should ideally be a positive one.

An interesting example: consider the following sequence-
- > +
One interpretation is, "negative is greater than positive"...and the other perspective is to interpret the '>' sign as a direction symbol towards positivity...so you see, it all depends on the perspective you choose. 

Choose wisely.

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Thanks for reading!! I hope you liked my first attempt at writing a reverse poem...if yes, and if you have any sort of feedback or any thoughts that you'd like to share, feel free to do so in the comments section!

Once again, thanks for reading, and stay tuned for my next post :D

Comments

  1. Negative thinking patterns are often wrongly justified as "being realistic"
    Your poem highlights you can be hopeful while still taking the present for what it is, which is a wonderful addition to the age old correct yet incomplete "think positively" phrase.

    As "think positively" does not mean delusionally assuming the good factors only, but considering all- good and bad- about the present and making out the best of it.

    Fantastic way to put it, Armaan!
    The reverse-poetry added a very creative layer to the whole concept.

    Overall an interesting poem, keep writing! :)

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    1. Glad to know you liked it! And well said! We must certainly not turn a blind eye to the negative realities...this is explained well by one of my favorite quotes...

      "We never lose our demons; we only learn to live above them."

      Thanks for reading!

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  2. Wow my mind is blown. So much expressions with minimal vocabulary understood to everyone, how do you do that Kothare .
    Highly impressed again 😊
    Keep up the good work👍

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    1. Thank you!!
      I'm happy that you liked the post...please keep sharing your feedback henceforth :D
      Thanks for reading!

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  3. C'est la vie!
    We decide our perspectives which go on to carve our destiny...no blame game here!...Absolutely in awe to read the ironical antithesis that your poem displays...n also what a profound vision of life u envision at such a young age ..hats off ..mushrooming writer...cz u always leave the reader pondering over his or her contribution to one's life's architecture...keep going n blessings in countless loads always !!!!

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      Thanks for reading!!

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  4. Wow! Simply superb penning from your stable Armaan! Its very intriguing how you get such creative ideas. Its simply awesome. You have so simply put a pessimist and an optimist on the the same page. The concept of reading from top to bottom and vice versa is simply superb. Keep on writing dear our best wishes and blessings are always with you dearest.Lots of love.
    Paa.

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    1. Glad you liked the concept!! Thanks for reading, and stay tuned for future posts :D

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    2. Great Going Armaan. You are a deep thinker which is rare at your age. All the very best. Keep writing.

      -Sanjay Ranade

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    3. Thank you! Your feedback means a lot :)

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  5. Amazing concept of poetic expression! Deep philosophical thoughts expressed with clarity! After all knowledge is learning something new everyday while wisdom is letting go of something everyday! Keep writing!

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    1. Thank you so much!
      Very happy to know that you liked the concept...also, well said!!
      Please keep giving me your valuable feedback, and stay tuned for the next one :)

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  6. This is art! Cool to read

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  7. Mind blowing talent displayed in writing a poem and then reversing with which the entire message sent is reversed. Keep up either the0 good work. VIJAY PRABHAKAR

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      Stay tuned for future posts!

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  8. Lovely piece Armaan. I know you wanted to write something like this, but to think this through and put it on paper/ electronic medium is amazing. Not to mention, the topic you touch upon itself is very very deep.

    Amazed ! Keep writing !!!

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    1. Yess....I've truly always wanted to write this type of poem, and I'm super excited for you to see me explore other concepts in the future! This is just one of the infinite topics that can be explored, so stick around!
      Glad you liked it, and thanks for reading :D

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  9. Amazing work ,Armaan.Well done
    Nived maushi

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      Elated to know you liked it :D

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  10. Very good Armaan keep it up

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  11. Very profound... Too good 👍. Although young, you think quite deep and have the ability to put it in words aptly. Kudos 👏. Continue to hone this skill.
    - Ajay Nair

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  12. Excellent composition. The concept of a reverse poem is very creative especially when it juxtaposes two opposites. The message at end of the poem is illuminating. Superlative.
    Ashok Nayak

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    1. Yes! I've always been fascinated by reverse poetry, so I thought I'd give it a shot :D
      Thanks for reading!!

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  13. Very profound n thought provoking— well done

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  14. Very well penned Armaani (Anita Kothare)

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  15. This is simply genius armaan!!! I am amazed at your play of words ….I don’t know how long you took to put the two perspectives together but it seems like you place your thoughts and words effortlessly - Moya maushi

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    1. Thank you for your encouraging words! It's not as hard or time consuming as it seems! Maybe we can discuss more about it later :D
      Stay tuned for more posts soon!!

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  16. 👌Armaan-A perfect way to demonstrate- how -one can have a different Prespective to a given situation and that one must always try to look out for a brighter/ wider perspective- coz if you are stuck with only one side of the coin you will never know the other- Niket K Navalkar

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    1. Glad you liked it! And that's an interesting view there...the 'two sides of a coin' approach...you're right, one should always look for the wider perspective!
      Thanks for reading :)

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  17. Beautifully drafted poem..loved the reverse poem concept which makes it even more deep and mind blowing understanding of the positives and negatives perspectives of life !! Keep going ..great write up as always !!

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    1. Happy to know that you've taken a liking for the concept! Thank you for your encouragement and thanks for reading :D

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  18. Amazing creation 🥰 !! Very well written !! Awesome concept of reading reverse ..too good 👍🏻👍🏻 keep writing 🥰🥰

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    1. Thank you for your motivating remarks!! Happy you liked the 'reverse-reading' aspect....Stick around for future posts :D
      Thanks for reading!

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  19. Excellent concept Armaan!! The reverse poetry added a very creative layer. Deep thoughts expressed with clarity. All The Very Best. KEEP WRITING.

    Shraddha Nayak

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  20. Very well written Armaan. It's an articulate display on the concept of life's perspective. Keep up the good work!
    Sudhir Aajo

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  21. Very thought provoking display of words, innovative and creative with this concept of 'reverse poem'. Awesome read Armaan, Keep Writing !!
    - Preeti Nair

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      Thanks for your review!!

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  22. Armaan, liked your thoughts.... So fresh and mature.... I enjoy reading your posts....

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    1. Happy to hear that!!
      I'd love to hear your thoughts regarding my previous posts as well :)
      Please stick around for future posts too!
      Thanks for reading!

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  23. I liked your interpretation of
    "Feeling" as a passive response to a situation
    & "Thinking" as a positive active response to situation
    (Horace Walpole)
    This was very intelligently crafted into a Pallindromic form to display both perspectives
    Well done Armaan

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    1. Your interpretative summary of the quote is on the mark! Glad you liked the palindrome-esque nature of the poem...hope you like the other posts as well :)
      Thanks for reading!!

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  24. Hey Armaan, Sorry but been a little late in reading ur poems but it was worth the wait. This is intriguing to say the least and how you were able to capture both the negativity and positivity in 1 poem. U have captured the word " persepective" in the perfect sense.....Keep up ur creative writing!!! looking fwd to ur future posts

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    1. Hey! Glad it was worth the wait!
      I'm happy to know that you liked the 'perspective' approach...I was testing unknown waters and was pretty proud of how it turned out :D
      Thanks for reading!!

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