Watching the seconds tick by,
Don't know how much longer I'll wait
But I'll do it without a sigh.
The tea is already cold
The careman's stopped asking 'why';
My schedule has known no chores
I just plan on getting by.
I think of all the different things
I could undertake to pass time,
But I know now, there's no point in them
Money now earnt is nought but futile.
It wasn't always quite like this
Life had much more smiles,
Mostly mine, but some my son's
It's true! Trust this rhyme.
We'd talk each day, and all day long
He'd share his days with me and Mom
But as time ran on, we edged away
Buried in our own days, all day long.
Things escalated as the world moved on
A lot less smiles, each with their share of wrongs
Playing and singin' songs are mere memories,
Ones I find hard to recall.
One fine day, we ended up on a plane
Young sonny's wife said he'd booked a place
"Mom and Dad's Weekend Getaway"
T'was 16 years ago, haven't seen his face.
There was no plane back to my son's home
There was no "getaway" for us in Rome;
There was no point in regretting our tones
There is nought but a yearning telephone.
Each day brought hope with the visiting hours
Each night asserted the contrary
Each year passed, along with his Mom
But the hope of the next keeps me merry.
So now, I lay back in my chair
Watching the seconds tick by,
Don't know how much longer I'll wait
But I'll do it without a sigh.
-Armaan Kothare
It is indeed amazing how your thoughts flow!!! Very well written!! Just too good!!! Awesome to witness how you start penning your thoughts on the key board and come up with a perfectly composed poem🥰🥰
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I'm happy you liked how this one turned out! It was based on the conversation we had the other day; felt like covering it in the form of this poem, as the underlying message in it has to reach as many people as possible...
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Indeed very deep …. I’m curious to know how the subject occurs to you and what are the triggers that push you to write about topics which perhaps rarely cross a teenager’s mind …. As usual amazing …. Keep writing …. My guess is that you channelise your life experiences very well on paper …. Keep up that good work
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DeleteBeautifully worded ,very touching indeed, very difficult to put it in paper but you do it so effortlessly, kudos to you , keep on writing we all njoy reading.
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DeleteVery well expressed Arman. The expression and pain can be truly felt by the person who reads it. Keep up the good work.
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DeleteNice effort Armaan ! Keep up the good work !! Keep on exploring different genres and learning about different facets of life. You learn through reading ( do more of it - than what you currently do ), keen listening ( as in this case whenever anyone is discussing anything around you ) and through experience... Ofcourse, you don't have to experience everything yourself to learn from it... you can be wiser by learning from other people's experience as well... As my maternal grannie would say - give everybody thy ear, but very few thy voice...
ReplyDeleteanyway looking forward to many more works from your creative mind !!!
Very true, and very well said!! Will keep it in mind :)
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Once again you captivated us readers by writing an amazing poignant poem... perfect rhymes...deep layers of thought...loved it!
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Excellent poem Armaan! I found myself drawn in and trying to figure out what had happened. I really liked the fact that you told a story while also keeping to the meter and rhyme of a poem. Great job! - Abhi Mama
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Amazing dearest Armaan! Your thoughts at this tender age are so matured.Its the stark reality of today's life. Keep writing dear. All our love and blessings are always with you!
ReplyDeletethank you!! keep giving me your valuable feedback :)
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