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Labour's Fruit (Poem-6)



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I was once just a common man,
Who wanted to become a lawyer, true;
But today I tread down another path,
Still a man, but my role is new.

Today, my people are gathered around me
All of them energetic and free,
However, just a few days ago
Mere freedom they would seek.

We were ruled upon by an invader
And we weren't treated well,
And living in this place was like
Living in worse than hell.

People were miserable 
And wanted a change soon
For everyone had had enough 
Of dancing to this evil's tune.

So, I stood up and called out to
My people and my friends,
I guided them all through the way
And we drove out the fiends.

On this day my people stay
Surrounding me with roses
And on this day I felt more blest
Than even Him, the holy Moses.

I acknowledge each blessing with
A smile across my face, 
But out of all the friendly faces
One held a gun, raised.

I felt the bullets pierce my chest
But they didn't hurt as much 
As compared to what feeling I had
I was attacked by one I loved.

I freed this man and his family 
But he didn't show regard,
I doubted everything I'd done,
I thought, "Hadn't I worked hard?"

Everyone gasped and screamed in fear
I could see some capture-tries
And helplessly, "Oh God" I say
And gently close my eyes.

I'd helped in freeing my country
From a foreign threat,
But I wonder, still, even to this day,
"Was all I deserved just death?"





-Armaan Kothare









Comments

  1. Lovely poem Armaan !! Very well described the feeling u wanted to bring about!! 🥰🥰👍👍 Keep it up!!

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  2. Wow... Beautifully expressed

    (your English teacher's gonna be so proud of you!)

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    1. Thank you for your feedback!! And I hope you're right 😅😁

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  3. Poetic promenade through the entire experience superbly verbalized !
    Bless u loads !
    N
    Keep going !
    Bravo !!!👍

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