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The Dying Mind (Poem-8)






He walks past you with a smile each day
And when he passes you, he waves;
And you too, wave back at him
You say, "He's a happy man on a happy day".

Why wouldn't he be happy though?
On the outside he does smile;
But its not that simple, my dear friend,
The human sense is fragile.

You saw his face, yes, he was smiling
But did you look deep inside?
Do you see those implying eyes?
Yes, on the inside, he cries.

He yearns for help but doesn't speak
And conceals this with a smile,
Wishes to keep his sadness hidden
Until in his will's file.

If in his eyes you glanced, you'd see
The extent of the consuming darkness
It pierces him, it suffocates him,
Until his mind's a terrible mess.

All these battles he fights everyday,
But doesn't shed a tear, he'll lie,
For when they'll ask him about his state
He'll simply say, "I'm fine".

Hence, before judging someone else
Just know that they too have a life,
And who knows? While they're working with you,
Their mind is dying inside.


- Armaan Kothare





This poem is attributed to everyone, literally everyone. Most of us feel like we have the hardest lives out of all people around us, and we are superior to others. Sort of as if the world revolves around us.
But this is wrong....each one of us has our own problems in our lives, even though some may not show this to the outer world. Consider this before choosing to judge or criticize anything about a person. Help others, and try to understand them; for if an ailing mind isn't helped soon, the end is certain and quite sad. It becomes too much for the victim to deal with. I hope you understood this poem, and please do make note of the message it conveys. 

Also, for anyone going through difficult times, I just hope you know that it'll be fine, as every cloud does have a silver lining. It may not feel like it, but you will get through these times!! Best of luck!!

Thanks for reading!

Comments

  1. Amazing expressed, it's sad but that's true in life we do come across many who share the same feeling as u expressed.
    Well expressed Armaan

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  2. Thought- provoking understanding of an anxious human mind, beautifully expressed!
    Kudos to you, dear Armaan!

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  3. WOW! Such a wonderful thought so beautifully penned! An absolute bare truth about the mind! Kudus Chonu ! Keep writing! Our best wishes and blessings are always with you dear! Simply superb!

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  4. Very thoughtfully penned Armaan! Such a beautiful message!! Keep it up dear!! 🥰🥰

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  5. Awesome job kid !!! Keep writing !!! When is the next one coming out ??

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    1. thanks dad!! it'll come soon, but no fixed date as such😅
      keep reading :D

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    2. Prodigal talent. Amazing insights at this tender age! as you read more and with life experiences your talent will bloom even more! God bless!

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    3. thank you kiran uncle! I hope you liked it :DD

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  6. Beautifully expressed!! Indeed is a banger(pun intended)

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  7. amazing, the way you have penned a rather weary emotional scenario. with anyone else, it would have been cliched

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    1. thanks Kiran uncle! happy you liked this one :DD

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  8. Nice thought , and how beautiful composition .

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  9. So beautifully portrait whats happening behind the made up smiles n "i m fines"

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