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Nightingale (Poem-10) [In Memory of Lata Mangeshkar]

Rest in peace, Ms. Lata Mangeshkar (1929-2022)



I still remember that day
When I was new to this town
Nobody got out of their way
Nay, didn't even show me 'round.

The town's people were a quaint folk
Did nought but incessant work
And the only signs of esprit were 
The Nightingale and these trees of birch.

The Nightingale, o, what a divine soul!
Seemed as though she channeled light
Her sweet and melodious harmonies,
They'd drown away the blues of the nights.

Each night I returned to my home
Exhausted, drained and in a sulk,
The only soul out there for me
Was that little bird in the tree pulp.

Whenever I wandered through
The darkest alleys of my mind,
The soft voice of the Nightingale 
Would help me leave the past behind.

It had been o'er a few decades since
She'd been singing songs for me
But good things must leave you once,
As when I returned one day, 
She was nowhere to be seen...

It had the voice of an angel
Had returned to where angels belong,
"But, true beings never truly die.."
She'd told me through a song;
She may be missing from the birch
But she was never truly gone,
For even today, in my heart
The Nightingale lives on.


-Armaan Kothare


This poem was written in the memory of and as a tribute to the Bharat Ratna recipient and one of the greatest singers of all time, Ms. Lata Mangeshkar. I won't pretend like I was a die-hard fan, but she truly was one of the most talented and gifted singers of all time, and perhaps will continue to be. 

You know you've left a mark when your name is known to even to those generations that were born after you couldn't sing anymore, and that is most definitely the case with Ms. Mangeshkar. Her loss was felt by millions of souls and those lives that she'd touched with her melodious voice.

Thank you for everything you've done, Nightingale of India, and may your soul find peace where you truly belong...
🙏🙏











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    1. Absolutely true feeling expressed dearest Armaan. A very apt tribute. Keep on writing Chonu! Bless you@

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  3. Armaan, this is just amazing.. should I call this a subtle allegory or a captivating and beautiful metaphor ! what an awesome way to pay tribute to one of the greatest souls god had sent to this mortal world. Your every next creation is mesmerizing and makes us feel proud to be the lucky ones to witness our Armaan blossoming into such a talented creator !

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      thanks for reading :D

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  4. I think it’s a masterpiece and absolutely breathtaking.
    Specially liked the lines....
    Whenever I wandered through
    The darkest alleys of my mind,
    The soft voice of the Nightingale
    Would help me leave the past behind....

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  5. Very well you have expressed tribute to Lata ji. Keep writing. God bless you.

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  6. I could actually feel every word.. Didi has touched so many hearts ... You have brought this out so well.. very thoughtful.. proud of you dear

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    1. Yes she truly has, I'm happy you liked the poem! keep reading and giving me your feedback :D
      thanks for reading!

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  7. You're truly an amazing writer Armaan, you have a gift I believe and this poem and the thought behind it is a testament to that. Keep going brother, always looking forward to reading more of your work.
    - Harsh Rane

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      thanks for reading :)

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  8. Very well expressed Armaan, looking forward to read more. God bless you always.

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  9. What a beautiful tribute to the legend! Love it! Keep it up!! 👍

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  10. Beautifully written...such a great tribute the legend 👏

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  11. Armaan..its very true... Beautiful way to pay tribute to the great talented soul...

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  12. Absolutely beautiful Armaan. The words are so touching and your language flows so smoothly!! Enjoyed reading it! Keep it up!

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  13. *छू जाते हो मुझे कितनी दफ़े तुम यूँ ही ख़्वाब बन के,*
    *कौन क़हता है कि दूर रहकर मुलाक़ात नहीं होतीं ....* 🌹

    Dearest Armaan

    Your words are healing,

    they do create a warm feeling,

    You know the meaning of words and its worth,

    Our very own Young Wordsworth.💕

    Love and regards

    Kanishk Jayant.
    8/2/2022.

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    1. wow! that's an awesome poem !
      thank you for your feedback, I'm happy you liked reading it
      thanks for reading :)

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  14. Excellent so well penned enjoyed reading it keep it up

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  15. Simply Wow! This poem on one of my favourite singers is so thoughtful and touching . The emotions that surface are truly gifted. Hats off to your emotional and intellectual balance Arman . Keep writing . God bless 🤗👏

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  16. Very well written and what a great tribute to the angel that will remain in our heart. Your poem was jut amazing keep writing dear.

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  17. Hey Armaan,
    Love your poetry.. so much depth in your thoughts and that too at such a tender age...!
    Love,
    Unnati Dhurandhar
    (Kitty Atya)

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  18. I have always been a big fan of Lata Didi and your heart felt eulogy really touched me deeply...as you grow older and when various life experiences enrich you, I am sure these songs will mesmerise you and accompany you as you traverse through the maze of life...your sensitivity and observation will be honed as you read more and then put it all down in words and enthrall all of us! Keep writing!

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      thanks, please keep reading and giving me your feedback !

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  19. Wooooow fantastic Armaan,you are gifted with such beautiful writing skills.
    I especiallyl,liked
    the line
    "True beings never truly die"....
    How nicely you have put together your expressions...
    I wish I could write like you....
    Superb...... keep writing ��


    Rajaa Ajinkya

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